Mild yellow sunrays break though
the invisible barriers
of baige glass.
But the wind stays
out, making the leaves dance
in a silent chaos.
I can feel the heat, I can't see it
I can see the wind, I can't feel it
The bamboo shoot peeping
through the window,
I look back at it.
It pops back into place,
As if to take a glimpse
of me,
I know its the wind, I don't
want to believe it!
Again, I see it, I can't feel it!
Cotton clouds cover uncover
the sun,
swimming across the blue sky.
Slant rays, they are
Still have the heat, mild, dim
Again I feel it, I can't see it!
Elongating the shadows, moving the leaves
Stretching the limits, mobilising the thoughts.
I see it, I feel it !!
the invisible barriers
of baige glass.
But the wind stays
out, making the leaves dance
in a silent chaos.
I can feel the heat, I can't see it
I can see the wind, I can't feel it
The bamboo shoot peeping
through the window,
I look back at it.
It pops back into place,
As if to take a glimpse
of me,
I know its the wind, I don't
want to believe it!
Again, I see it, I can't feel it!
Cotton clouds cover uncover
the sun,
swimming across the blue sky.
Slant rays, they are
Still have the heat, mild, dim
Again I feel it, I can't see it!
Elongating the shadows, moving the leaves
Stretching the limits, mobilising the thoughts.
I see it, I feel it !!
11 comments:
why no title??[:)]
didnt feel like giving one.. :)
your love for nature is evident:)
poet mode! (or poetess?)
Hey. Nice.
@pi: danke sir, havent heard from you for a while now!!
great...i absolutely loved it.
sometimes we do have to thank our creator for giving us memories...makes it much easier to feel things.
-navneet
hi ankita dj,
this is one of the better poems of yours.. you are doing great in free verse. a lot of imagery, insight... the poem is quite lyrical, and i guess you could do well with a guitar in your hand now. my fave lines were:
Cotton clouds cover uncover
the sun,
swimming across the blue sky
all the best,
wanderer...
@ma: its all coz of u ma...!!
@mr. wanderer: who are u buddy...?? and thanks a ton for that comment!!
anybody home???
I did not know since when you have learned literary poweres to express so beautifully.... so coherant... so freely.... Wow ....Good keep it up. Guess who
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